To write plainly and concisely, opt for and instead of the roundabout phrase in conjunction with. Other possibilities include along with, as well as, combined with, coupled with, paired with, together with and with.
- Wordy:
The hotel, in conjunction with the wedding planner, prepared a sumptuous banquet.
Positive reinforcement should be provided in conjunction with constructive criticism. - Concise:
The hotel and the wedding planner prepared a sumptuous banquet.
Positive reinforcement should be provided along with constructive criticism.
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