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Review: Sentence Usage, Answer 3.2

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The citizens of Kingston have gone too long without decent bicycle paths!
The answer ineffective sentence is correct.
While the issue of bicycle paths is an important one, the writer has made a serious mistake here by using an exclamatory sentence—it makes the tone look forced and the writer insincere. Use an exclamatory sentence only when a point is truly shocking.
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